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Julie Tallard Johnson's avatar

Bravo Jane. Write on! These suggestions remind me of Several Short Sentences About Writing Paperback – by Verlyn Klinkenborg. One of my favorite books on writing.

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Jane Hillstrom's avatar

I believe you recommended that book to me years ago. It’s a great book. ❤️

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

Such a brave new chapter you’re in Jane. And it’s a privilege to be alongside you here on Substack as you continue to learn and share.

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Jane Hillstrom's avatar

I am forever grateful for your encouragement, knowledge and inspiration!

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Julia Frater's avatar

Your journey, beautifully expressed.

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Jill Johnson's avatar

What a journey, Jane! Reading this piece is a craft lesson on writing:)

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Rilla Jaggia's avatar

Awesome! It is so very hard to go from impersonal reports about someone else’s life to writing about your own, feelings and all. You are so very brave. ❤️ Thank you for sharing.

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Brenda Baker's avatar

Love these lessons Jane and your brave new world!

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